BenKolk's Reviews

[The Tale Teller]

Fantastic video! Not sure what I was expecting going in, but boy was I not disappointed!

[vatikan evil ep 1 of 3]

Cool video, hyped for the next two episodes!

The good:
Especially in the intro, the camera angles were really cool! The 3d elemens worked really nicely as well. The voice acting was also pretty decent. The music fit the mood of the situations as well.

The bad:
The diction of the narrator was sometimes on the poorer side. It got hard to understand him from time to time. The horizon of the video would be either black or white and seemed like it appeared way too soon in the video; if it could be pushed back a bit, it would be really nice. There was a scene or two where the sounds of the footsteps didn't really line up with the character's walking. I think this was most noticable in one of the first few walking scenes. There also is a few times where the dialog feels like it was places in an unnatural place, be it too close or too far apart. The music cut out once or twice and it made it feel really weird. Maybe it was just to restart the song, but still. Also, when things got a little more action-y, the camera started getting really choppy and it started to look really weird. Smoothen it up a bit and it could be really nice!

All in all, it's good, but it's raw. Very raw. Excited to see what is to come in the future!

rostix responds:

The second chapter will be nice polished smooth and so on..I'm interestd more in the concept and core of the story but you bastards seems to shit everytime over my doings!....JUST KIDDiNG,I know this all,thanks for the rewiev and the time..The reason why I decidedto pubblish it in a raw form couse integrate 3d with 2d requires a lot of time ..god damned my pc blows up in the conversion of frames ..so for example when I sow a mistake after the conversion of a day,well. .I simply closed an eye. .hahaha

[TF5 - Alone in the Dark]

Really cool, mental video! I really liked it. However, the reason it's only 3 stars is due to the audio quality. It really takes away from the whole experience. It also sounds like it's being played out of some cheap speakers, and for the experience that I *think* you're trying to portray, some rumbling low ends and sub bass would go a really long ways.
Also the vomiting sound effects could be a tad more realistic, and like was said in another review, the vomiting lasts a bit too long as well.
Other than that, great job!

[DragonKite]

There's a really slow and inconsistent response for descending. Other than that, everything seems to function.

[GRAV]

This was a really cool start of something awesome. Had tons and tons of potential to be an amazing game. Good music, really great art, etc. Please make this into a full game!

tinyworlds responds:

I'm thinking about it at the moment :)

[Endless Toy Flight]

Good game in essence, but there is no challenge here. All you need to do is go back and forth the whole time

[BurgeraX: Crystal [Complextro]]

Tasty groove, dude! I think it could benefit from some beefier cymbals in the beginning, but other than that, really solid track!

If I may ask, what'd you use to make this?

EruptionMusic responds:

Fruityloops studio 10:) cuz i'm too lazy for 12 and it's confusing to me lol

[Legacy]

Sounding pretty good! I love the swing with the hi hats. Only thing I have to say is it really needs a melody. Other than that, you've got a great tune!

Zikex responds:

Ok thanks!

[FIDDLER ON THE TRAP]

The fiddle is an interesting element. Cool thing going on here.
However, the audio quality is really bad. Like *really* bad. Also the autotune feels like it's unnecessary since you aren't actually singing. Especially at :16. And the fidelity doesn't do the autotune any favors, either. At :21 it sounds like the audio for the vocals were cut off really early. Also the song ends very abruptly. There should at least be a fadeout or something so it isn't such a harsh ending. I would also probably put this under hip hop and not electronic/new wave.
But other than that, the vocals were on time at least. That's a lot more than what some rappers could say.

r4godofsun responds:

song isn't completed. this is a sample. Thank you for th3 input, it is greatly greatly appreciated.